Now, the Lights Out episode we looked at was an instance where the Shadow was added to a script; this time he had to be eliminated from the script! So, let's analyze how that was accomplished:
Both scripts open in the office of the physician in charge of an insane asylum during a stormy night; in "Nightmare at Gaeslbury" it's Dr. Blair in Gaelsbury, in "the Kettler Method" it's Dr. Morriseey in Calston. The biggest difference with the Suspense version though is that it has a narrator who adds a lot of additional details at the start of each scene.
Dr. Blair is treating a difficult patient who believes he received secret knowledge from the sorcerer Cagliostro. He rants at Dr. Blair then is returned to his cell by the keeper McPherson. Dr. Blair tells his nurse that this man had been a scientist until a female patient died on the operating table. The nurse opines that Dr. Blair needs a rest and Blair mentions his friends Lamont Cranston and Margo Lane are coming for a visit. Suddenly there's a gunshot and Dr. Blair and the nurse discover they're locked inside his office. The insane patient (later named Griswold) can be heard laughing in the hall.
On Suspense, the keeper is named Caffrey and there's an added exchange where he brings the insane patient to see Dr. Morrissey. All the exposition about who the patient is (Kettler in this version) occurs between Morriseey and Caffrey instead of Morrissey and the nurse. Kettler enters and demands to see the male patient he had been operating on, a man named Benham. Kettler is convinced Benham is hidden somewhere in the asylum. Although the content of their exchange is very different, it leads to a conversation between Morrissey and his nurse that is mostly the same as the prior version. Morrissey mentions his friends Leslie and Claire Winton will be visiting him. The nurse also mentions she put some new bandage samples into his coat pocket (which become important later). Then there's a scream and a gunshot. Caffrey tries to get into the office but when Morrissey opens the door, Caffrey is near-dying and warns him Kettler is coming with the other patients. Kettler exclaims, "tables turn!"
Both scripts go to a musical transition as the scene changes. Both scripts open at a train station as the couples arrive in Gaelsbury/Calston. Mention should be made that the character of Leslie Winton will be the equivalent of Lamont Cranston in the Suspense version; he's played by John Gibson, who portrays Leslie as a very milquetoast type of character. Anyway, it's established that Margo/Claire has a headache that's bothering them. In the Shadow version, Lamont and Margo are pestered by a vendor and they agree to buy a jackknife for Margo's nephew (the jackknife is kind of a substitute for the bandages in Suspense). In both scripts, the couples are met by a man from the sanitarium - Tarfu/Kato, who speaks in a deep voice and limited vocabulary. Strangely, the descriptions of Tarfu and Kato are different - Lamont describes Tarfu as West Indian and 7 feet tall; Kato's nationality isn't given but he's guessed to be 8 feet tall!
Another musical transition as scenes change. The couples arrive at the sanitarium as Tarfu/Kato tells them to wait. They're visited by a man who warns them that the inmates are running the asylum; he's a famous musician (Sigmund Arnold on the Shadow, Arturo Alvarez on Suspense). The two scripts are much the same as the couples assume the musician is one of the patients. Dr. Griswold/Kettler then arrives and has Tarfu/Kato return the musician to his cell. Interestingly, in the first script he's called "patient number 8" but in the second he's "patient number 10." Dr. Griswold/Kettler introduces himself to the couples and claims that Dr. Blair/Morrissey is away on an emergency case, leaving him in charge of the sanitarium. When Margo/Claire mentions her headache that interests the doctor, who insists he can treat her case and invites Lamont/Leslie to enjoy some drinks or cigarettes in the office.
The Shadow then has a short scene that has no equivalent on Suspense in which supporting character Commissioner Weston receives a call from Dr. Blair who tries to inform Weston of the takeover that's going on at Gaelsbury. And that's the entirety of Weston's influence on this episode, which makes me wonder why this scene was even used.
Returning to the sanitarium, we have near-identical scenes in which Lamont/Leslie discover there are no drinks or cigarettes in the office. Turning on the radio they hear a broadcast mentioning Arnold/Alvarez's concert has been cancelled, causing Lamont/Leslie to realize the musician they met was the real person. Just as they try to confront the doctor they instead run into Tarfu/Kato, who informs them that Margo/Claire is going to receive a special operation. Lamont/Leslie object and the doctor enters and is quite put out when Lamont/Leslie "demands" to see her. Tarfu/Kato knocks out Lamont/Leslie from behind and the doctor gloats over his fallen body.
I should mention at this point that the Shadow episode is half-over and at the commercial break, yet the Suspense program, which has no commercials, is 2/3rds through their script!
Lamont/Leslie find themselves sealed in a room with Dr. Blair/Morrissey. There's some exposition as Blair/Morrissey explains what happened. We also learn Blair had his leg broken after being caught telephoning Commissioner Weston (no such injury was performed on Morrissey). It's after the big exposition scenes that the scripts diverge quite a bit. On the Shadow, Lamont remembers he still has a jackknife in his pocket. Lamont gives the knife to Dr. Blair and he waves it around at Tarfu, fascinating his simple mind as a diversion while Lamont escapes the basement.
Lamont escapes the sanitarium by climbing over the wall but is spotted by a pair of Irish cops who are passing by. Lamont tries to explain the situation to them but they assume he's an escaped mental patient and lead him back inside. Dr. Griswold even shows off Arnold to the policemen; when Lamont correctly identifies Arnold, the policemen believe the doctor's story, doubting a famous musician would be in the sanitarium. Griswold claims he doesn't want the responsibility of holding Lamont any longer and tells the police to take him away (apparently it's that easy! the police go along with this!). Fortunately, while leaving the facility they find Tarfu menacing Dr. Blair. The police drive off Tarfu with their bullets and apologize to Lamont for how they treated him.
Now, on Suspense Leslie gets the idea to masquerade as Benham, Kettler's deceased patient. Morrissey covers Leslie's face with bandages so that he won't be immediately recognized. In both scripts, Lamont/Leslie interrupt the procedures on Margo/Claire's headaches but the procedures and circumstances are quite different; Griswold wants to use insulin on Margo while Kettler wants to cut Claire's head open. Lamont appears to Griswold as the Shadow, claiming to be the ghost of Cagliostro to play on his mind, while Leslie enters the room in bandages claiming to be Benham.
On the Shadow, Griswold tries to flee the sanitarium and, in fear, shoots Tarfu with his gun; Tarfu stabs Griswold to death with the jackknife. On Suspense, Kettler realizes Leslie isn't Benham and is about to stab him when a sudden shot rings out; it turns out Claire stole Kettler's pistol and shot him with it.
Both close with Dr. Blair/Morrissey enjoying a quiet evening with Lamont/Leslie and Margo/Claire, listening to the music of Arnold/Alvarez while they recap how the plot was foiled thanks to their quick thinking. And as a closing line, Margo/Claire notes: "My headache-- it's completely gone!"
If you'd like to hear and compare these episodes for yourself, here you go:
Friday: Murderrrrr aaaat Midnight!
1 comment:
You have a true and unique love of old time radio but beyond that, you have the education and background to see levels that almost all other people would fail to see. I think that this is the best OTR blog that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I might chide some times but I do want to know what your feeling about Canadian OTR are. There were some good ones from the '60's and '70's albeit with terrible audio. The modern ones are often disturbing to me in a way that OTR of the past were not. The Vanishing Point is bizarre in many ways.
This one is excellent but also disturbing: https://archive.org/details/NightfallUPGRADES
British OTR leaves me cold. I speak Spanish, French, Italian and Portuguese but none of these countries have any of their old radio shows extant. Now the modern Radio Plays by Radio Exterior de Espana and Radio France in those languages are astonishingly good. I recommend Dracula from both of those places if one understands Spanish and French. Brazil is all about the soap opera.
Not really on the topic but I think that having a free trade union of people and goods between Canada and the U.S. would be spectacular. You grew up in the shadow of U.S. culture and so a lot of that culture you share with Americans and Canadians speak a form of English that differs only slightly from General American but after a few years of good teaching, all of you will be able to pronounce the word "about". I happen to have hockey on and all of the announcers seem to struggle with this sound. You pronounce your "R's" like we and the Irish and Scots do. I hope Canadians will realize that most of this is in good fun but honestly my brother and I who like hockey wanted you guys to win the other night. It just matters so much to you guys. You would have been crushed with a loss in 2012 in the Olympics. Americans were like eh (not "ey").
When most Americans think of Canada, we do not think of you as "other". We inherently feel close to Canadians and trust them. It would be great to not even have border crossings with you guys. Thanks for your blog.
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